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The Eye Window

  Submitted by: FearFables user: SilverBark

  Category: Legends

  There is an old stone tower nestled deep in the Granger Ridge woodlands, where the trees are older than memory and the sky vanishes beneath their branches. Locals say the forest turns back around you once you are too close—branches suddenly where they were not, birdsong re-looping.

  Some describe it as déjà vu.

  Others say it is the tower choosing which version of the path you walked down to remember.

  Some claim they came back from the tower by a different trail than the one they took in—yet their footprints led both ways. One woman said she came home wearing the wrong shoes.

  You will not find the tower on any map.

  The forest has grown around it like a secret, curling over the land like a closed fist. The path leading there is more suggestion than trail, visible only when the light slants just right, when the birds go quiet, and when the air feels like it’s waiting.

  No one knows who built it. Some say it was a colonial fort. Others claim it was once a fire watchtower, abandoned after a ranger climbed it during his first week on the job and came down…different. He would not speak. Just stared off toward the woods, mouth open, eyes too wide. He disappeared the night after his retirement, and in his cabin, someone found a sketchbook full of windows. Not towers. Just windows. Hundreds of them.

  Some were crossed out in thick charcoal. Others had names written underneath—not his own, but similar ones. Like echoes. Or replacements.

  But all were the same shape.

  A tall, arched shape. Cut into stone.

  The Eye Window.

  It is said the stone used to build the tower was brought over from Ireland—cut from the ruins of a monastery that should never have been built. Locals called the site An Caisleán Cailleach—The Hag’s Keep.

  The monastery had been sealed during the Black Death, after its final inhabitants—twelve monks and one novice—were heard chanting long after their recorded deaths. Visitors reported the songs had no melody, only rhythm. One note repeated like a heartbeat.

  When the chapel was broken open years later, they found the walls scorched black—not by fire, but by contact. Something had pressed from the inside.

  Every mirror in the ruin had shattered—each one placed facing inward, toward the center of the chapel, as if arranged to keep something inside.

  A single passage, scrawled in the margins of a rotted hymnal, survived translation:

  “Do not let it find your eyes. That is how it learns your face.”

  Others claimed the stones themselves were marked—not carved, not painted. Just…marked. Like memory etched into shape.

  There were no survivors.

  And yet, when the tower was built in Granger Ridge centuries later, those same stones were shipped and laid again.

  Some say the tower inherited something.

  Others say…it remembered.

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  Some even say the tower inherited something from those stones. That it wasn’t built to protect against fire or enemy scouts, but to house something. Or watch for something. Or feed something with sight.

  Because the Eye window is still intact.

  High up. Slit-thin. Facing nothing.

  They say it does not look at the woods.

  They say it looks into people.

  The locals have rules. Not laws, not guidelines—rules.

  Not written.

  Not posted.

  Just remembered.

  Passed down from grandmothers with soft voices, from rangers who retired early and never gave a reason.

  The Watcher’s Rules: (As collected from scattered interviews, annotated maps, and the margins of three separate field journals—each found abandoned near the tower.)

  


      
  • Do not speak aloud near the Eye. It memorizes faster when it hears your voice. Shape is sound, too.


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  • If the window is lit at twilight, cover your face. It does not recognize masks—only what is left behind.


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  • If you feel watched, leave something personal behind. Not as tribute. As decoy. It follows weight and scent—not truth.


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  • Do not bring mirrors. It compares. And if it prefers the other version, it might invite it out.


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  • If your reflection moves before you do, freeze. The shape behind the glass is making decisions.


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  • Never count the steps aloud. That is how it learns your timing. It watches for breath between numbers.


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  • Do not wear borrowed things. It tracks shape, not soul. It remembers what you looked like better than who you are.


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  • Never say your name while facing the window. That is how it learns where to find your voice again.


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  • If the wind repeats your name back to you…stop. That is not wind anymore.


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  They say the Eye doesn’t look at our world anymore.

  It looks through it.

  Across something older. Not dead. Not alive. Just waiting.

  A mirrored realm where time walks sideways, where breath runs backwards, where things practice being real.

  And when it finds a shape it likes—

  It keeps it.

  A girl named Erica once wandered too close at dusk. She says she saw her silhouette in the Eye Window. But when she moved, it didn’t. Then it did. Not opposite. Not mirrored.

  Just…wrong.

  A beat behind. Or ahead.

  She refused to speak for days. When she spoke again, her voice echoed too soon. As if remembering itself. She began to draw—dozens of images of herself, always in profile. None had eyes. One was smiling.

  It was not her.

  She kept asking why her shadow would sometimes lag behind, even in full sun. Once, it waved.

  She did not.

  A man once threw a rock at the window. People say he screamed until his ears bled. Witnesses asserted he clawed at the ground, repeating: “It said my name before I was born.” Later, doctors found scratch marks inside his cheek—as if trying to get the name out. Not what he was called. What he would be.

  Four teens took a group photo in front of it last year. Three were in the picture. All four were there.

  The fourth never spoke again. He would only stand at the edge of mirrors, staring into the top corners. His phone contained dozens of blurred photos.

  Each showed the tower from a different angle—except in all of them, he was inside the Eye Window. Watching himself.

  Some say he is still out there,

  Wandering Granger Ridge with an old camera. Taking pictures of places that do not exist.

  Looking for someone.

  Or maybe trying not to be found.

  A hiker went missing on a foggy morning. His gear was found in a neat pile beside the tower. His phone contained only one photo: the tower, seen from the path. Newly built. No ivy. No rot. Just the Eye Window. And in it: a face.

  Experts later claimed the photo was not digitally altered—it was printed on the inner side of the lens itself. When reversed, the timestamp read: You.

  They say the tower is haunted. But not by a ghost.

  Not by anything that was once alive.

  It is not haunted.

  It is occupied.

  Something looks out from the Eye Window. And it’s still learning. Its knowledge is not thought.

  It is form.

  Motion.

  Sound.

  You step too long, and it memorizes the cadence. You blink too slow, and it learns the rhythm. You speak, and it waits for your name to echo back wrong.

  A park ranger who went missing in the 90s was found a year later, half-frozen, mumbling the same phrase:

  “It climbed out through me.”

  No one tries to climb the tower anymore. Not after the last one who never came down.

  Not after someone said they saw two faces in the window the next night.

  Not after the tower blinked.

  They say the Eye Window does not just look out.

  It looks in.

  And once it learns your face—

  It never stops watching.

  So, the next time you pass a window,

  Check who is on the other side.

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