Introduction:

  Okay I’m super bored right now so I’ll just go on a tangent and work on a rewrite/ critique of RWBY because good gods know that series is a shit show now.

  If I had to say the most frustrating thing about RWBY is that it does not have a good foundation for the way they want to take the show, no Justification. By justification I mean most thing’s aren’t either earned or established. In my rewrite I’ll try to justify RWBY’s current narrative the best I can without changing the story. Because in all honesty RWBY’s story so far is amazing, its just told VERY poorly. To justify things, I’ll focus on a few key points:

  Magic AuraSembnce Characters Retionships Power Scaling Status Adam (Antagonist)Shadows Now all these key point won’t be addressed in order, but by importance to how I justify RWBY’s story.