I'll be remaking the entire thing from scratch... well, not exactly scratch since I'm keeping most of the story elements I already made. I'll also be posting it in my wordpress page... ok, maybe I'll post a new fiction for it here.

  I won't take down what's currently posted here though, but I feel that I've made various mistakes everywhere to make up for the potential I was hoping for. The new one will still come in the same title, but the story will be slightly different... or maybe entirely different.

  If you encounter this story on Amazon, note that it's taken without permission from the author. Report it.

  And I'm not doing this because someone dissed me or anything. I'm just very unsatisfied with how it became.